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招生对象:雅思考生
雅思口语课程
学习计划:
针对您的离考时间而制定学习计划,教师需要知道您是第几次考试,上次的分数,目标分数,以有的放矢的帮助您在有限的时间内提高。
上课安排:
您的口语培训由二部分组成:雅思专项能力提高和模考冲刺。前者 (IE Prep Class) 针对您的主要突破点进行专项特训并附加高频题练习与纠错。后者 (IE Dash Class) 在模考的场景下,帮助您练习最新预测题和纠错,并提供制作的参考答案。这二部分会交叉进行以保障最佳效果。
 
上课课件我会通过即时通讯工具发给您。
 
 
雅思写作课程
学习计划:
针对您的离考时间而制定学习计划,我需要知道你是第几次考试,上次的分数,要提高几分,目标分数,以帮助你在有限的时间内提高。
上课安排:
您的写作培训由二部分组成:雅思写作批改和讲解。前者是由我给那你指定的题目(包括预测试题)针对您的主要突破点(写作的结构,逻辑,语法,词汇,4个打分项目)进行专项特训并附加高频题练习与纠错。后者讲解则需要互动,给你查缺补漏,并提供参考答案。这二部分会交叉进行以保障最佳效果。
 
主讲老师:
 
口语通用户名:catherine04
http://www.oralpractice.com/read_70665.html
 
上课时间:
 
联系教师口语通,互相商定。 
 

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修改例文

本篇是修改后的学生例文
红色是学生的原本,也就是去掉的内容,
绿色是改后的



Many old buildings are protected by the law because they are part of a nation’s history. However, some people think they should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?


Currently, in ourthe commercial society, a host of structures/buildingserections are in the process of construction (OR being erected1 to keep pace with the needs of rapid economic growth. In the meanwhile, some people with opposing viewsopposites assert that old buildings, which are of high historical value, should be conserved2. This notion can hold water, from my perspective, but in the mainstream3 we should continue new constructions in terms of the long-term interests of humans (use homosapiens when talking scientifically)Homo sapience4.



Obviously, there are numerous profits brought by benefits from the modern buildings. In the first place, by and large, a population explosion and scarce land resources are tough issues that individuals are confronted with.(“that confront individuals” sounds better)
These
,
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which can be addressed by high-rise buildings, because high-rise buildings that (a shorter sentence construction sounds better) make use ofcould apply land resources more effectively than old buildings. As a result, they it can offer more spacious5 rooms to enormous numbers of people. Moreover, the design of modern buildings isare wiser? more wisable. New ecological6 technologies have been introduced into the architectural designses, which are conductive to maintaining the ecological equilibrium7. Solar powered buildingsproof, for instance, could utilize8 the finite and pure solar power sufficiently9 efficiently10.



Start a new paragraph. This is a new idea (not a benefit from modern buildings) What’s more, the expense of erection is far less than the repair costfare of old buildings. SBecause some old buildings, damaged by diverse adverse11 circumstances, would need not only grants but also hundredsmillions of experts to involved in the repair work.



In spite of this, the virtues12 of old buildings are not denied. At the very least, they represent the prosperous ancestryol civilizations of a nation. In addition, from digging and researching, experts, such as archaeologists, could figure out the first-hand invaluable13 data first-hand, some of which could be drawn14 (incorporated sounds better) into the current architectural designses.



To conclude, even though old buildings possess the precious historical value, individuals should be well-advisedsuggested to build up convenient, environmentally -friendly offices and houses to keep pace with the contemporary development.

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