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雅思作文如何简单句变复杂句

时间:2015-10-13 23:52:12

(单词翻译:单击)

   在教学过程中,强调让学生多写单句,单句写好了,复杂句也会写。这个做法可能和大部分的老师是相反的。但这个教学方法基于一个简单的道理:雅思考官不好蒙骗。你一个复杂句如果写的不对,考官马上可以看出来,分数马上就会降低。因此,踏实写好简单句,分数更加容易提高。

  只有当你熟悉单句后,才可以将句子连接起来。
  方法1:如果两个简单句没有因果关系,基本上是两个独立的事情,往往可以简单地用and相连。
  举例:Children are not sensitive to prices and parents prefer to satisfy their needs.
  方法2:如果两个简单句有一定的因果关系,往往可以用状语从句相连。
  一般来说,if 和when引导条件状语从句(也有一定因果关系,只是不那么强)
  举例:If advertising1 campaigns directed at children are regulated, children will not pester2 their parents to buy many goods for them.
  Since, as, because, so等引导原因或者结果状语从句,表示比较强的因果关系
  举例:some children like fast food since they are overwhelmed by fast food advertisements every day.
  方法3:如果状语从句怕重复,可以用and(或者;)+连接词的方式
  有很多连接词because of this, as a result of this, consequently, as a consequence 等,都是表示因果关系。
  举例:some children are addicted3 to violent video games, and because of this, they can show aggression4 and bully5 their peers at school.
  方法4:如果第一个单句的最后一个单词和第二个单句的第一个单词重复,可以用定语从句连接。
  举例:Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction6 to violent electronic games. These games are normally promoted by advertising firms.
  可以改成:Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction to violent electronic games, which are normally promoted by advertising firms.
  方法5:如果第二个单句是第一个单句的结果,有可能使用非限制性定语从句
  举例:Advertisements have given a lot of information about products. This enables parents to make well-informed buying decisions.
  可以改成:Advertisements have given a lot of information about products, which can help parents to make well-informed buying decisions.
  简而言之,不要嫌弃简单句,简单句写熟了,复杂句很容易写

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1 advertising 1zjzi3     
n.广告业;广告活动 a.广告的;广告业务的
参考例句:
  • Can you give me any advice on getting into advertising? 你能指点我如何涉足广告业吗?
  • The advertising campaign is aimed primarily at young people. 这个广告宣传运动主要是针对年轻人的。
2 pester uAByD     
v.纠缠,强求
参考例句:
  • He told her not to pester him with trifles.他对她说不要为小事而烦扰他。
  • Don't pester me.I've got something urgent to attend to.你别跟我蘑菇了,我还有急事呢。
3 addicted dzizmY     
adj.沉溺于....的,对...上瘾的
参考例句:
  • He was addicted to heroin at the age of 17.他17岁的时候对海洛因上了瘾。
  • She's become addicted to love stories.她迷上了爱情小说。
4 aggression WKjyF     
n.进攻,侵略,侵犯,侵害
参考例句:
  • So long as we are firmly united, we need fear no aggression.只要我们紧密地团结,就不必惧怕外来侵略。
  • Her view is that aggression is part of human nature.她认为攻击性是人类本性的一部份。
5 bully bully     
n.恃强欺弱者,小流氓;vt.威胁,欺侮
参考例句:
  • A bully is always a coward.暴汉常是懦夫。
  • The boy gave the bully a pelt on the back with a pebble.那男孩用石子掷击小流氓的背脊。
6 addiction JyEzS     
n.上瘾入迷,嗜好
参考例句:
  • He stole money from his parents to feed his addiction.他从父母那儿偷钱以满足自己的嗜好。
  • Areas of drug dealing are hellholes of addiction,poverty and murder.贩卖毒品的地区往往是吸毒上瘾、贫困和发生谋杀的地方。