2016年专四作文范文押题:少年犯

押题4 少年犯是否应该和成年犯受到相同的处罚？

题目要求：

Should young criminals be treated in the same way as adults by authorities? This issue has been intensely discussed for years. The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly¹ the opinions from both sides and give your views on the issue.

Marks will be awarded for content relevance², content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

YES

If our courts take a more lenient³ position, then the related laws and punishment will not have a deterring⁴ effect on teenagers. As a result, teenagers are likely to commit horrible crimes since they are aware that they have legal protection.

Only by taking stern legal measures against these young criminals can we bring a number of misguided young people around to the right road.

In some cases, the lighter⁵ sentences might also lead to people’s resentment⁶ towards the judicial⁷ system as victims might argue that these young offenders⁸ do not confess what they have done. This could also result in insecurity in our society eventually.

NO

The circumstances of a crime and the criminal’s motivation should be taken into consideration when it comes to juvenile⁹ delinquency. For example, because of distress¹⁰ and hunger, some teens may turn to stealing food or robbery during the period of famine. In view of the above reasons, harsh punishment, such as long-term jail might not be the best solution.

Some alternatives such as community service might be better for some young offenders who lack parenting and self-discipline to get a new start in their later life.

Minors¹¹ are likely to be given a better chance for rehabilitation¹² when they commit crimes because of their inexperience of life and possibly better life prospects¹³.

审题思路:

本题讨论少年犯是否应该和成年犯受到相同的处罚。在具体行文方面，考生首先要总结材料，概述正反双方的观点：正方认为未成年罪犯应受到和成年罪犯同样的惩罚；而反方认为对未成年罪犯惩处要考虑多种因素。然后给出自己的观点：少年犯受到何种处罚应该视具体情况而定。最后总结全文，重申观点。

高分范文：

Should Young Criminals Be Treated in the Same Way as Adults by Authorities?

In recent years, the rate of juvenile delinquency keeps on soaring, which has attracted lots of attention from the general public and the social scientists. Accordingly, whether young lawbreakers should be punished equally as adult criminals has become one of the most controversial issues throughout the world. Some people claim that the lighter sentences will neither minimize the number of crimes committed by the teenagers nor make the victims believe in equal justice, while others hold the view that what sanctions will be employed should be decided¹⁴ by taking the criminals’ age, motivation and future development into consideration.

My stand is that this is never a purely¹⁵ black and white issue. Whether the same penalty should be imposed on juvenile lawbreakers and adult criminals is on the basis of the specific case. On the one hand, those who commit violent crimes, such as rape¹⁶ or murder, should be treated in the same way regardless of the criminals’ age so as to ensure the justice and equality. On the other hand, if teenagers embark¹⁷ on the criminal road because of negligence¹⁸, passion and induction¹⁹, a lighter penalty can help them reflect on themselves as well as give them a chance to turn over a new life.

All in all, it is a hasty approach to simply impose the same penalties on young criminals as adults and judges should be more discreet²⁰ about the punishment on juvenile criminals.

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